When I grow up 2

Writer’s block is horrible! Ahhhhh! (dramatic acting and stuff…)

Anywho… It has been a while. I took the time to re-read one or two chapters and thought to myself: ‘editing is my enemy!’ but after I need to take a long break and focus on editing. Well, now with a few chapters stocked once again, thankfully. I can publish again. What I had noticed and had been told by a few readers is that I have too many detailed descriptions. So I have stopped looked over and felt that it is not really necessary because it seemed more like I just want to fill the chapter with a bunch of useless words.

Honestly, sometimes being so tired from work or gym I do just publish whatever, but most of the time I’m more like: ‘I want my reads to have a vivid imagination of the situation. I want them to imagine the leads and cannon fodder characters like a movie. I want them to feel the emotion and think of the character as them.’

That is what I think when I am writing. Sadly though I have realised as well, that this book is not most people, cup of tea. She is too quirky. Her thoughts keep derealing and finally reverse harem on the site I am writing on is not popular so yeah, I became blank. I tried to think how I can just continue without drifting too far from how I want the book to further develop.

Anyway, this is the link to the chapter below. A forewarning: it is a paid chapter but you can look at the free chapters and give me your opinion on what you have read so far.

Enjoy~

Quincy secondary school (time skip) https://www.webnovel.com/book/19276491206019005/56613447118420639?utm_campaign=4309444154

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