chapter 7
Reviews 4789:
4/5 stars
[ Astrid_reeds: dear author, how dare you break my heart like this? Two stars, and that’s only because the story was still well written]
5/5 stars
[ Mariocartious: I hope you are happy. This book should be a horror, suspense and twisted. Drawn in for the first nine hundred and ninety-five chapters until the last five where you killed off each and everyone of the male leads and then had the female lead kill herself. Are you proud? A beautiful story ruined by your heartlessness you twisted *%+*Ing b*%&@! I hope you will never get a man and die single!]
5/5 stars
[ Aloeversionzest: wuwuwuwu I hate you author! Grow old alone!]
4/5 stars
[ Crisandcrissy: my girlfriend read this book for three months. I watched my relationship become extremely well because of this. She did things that before she would never do, so I picked up the book curious and felt enlightened to be honest it was extremely well written the description was from your point of view so each experience is like.. It was you but then the book just went downhill the last five chapters. It depressed my girlfriend for two weeks, she cried nonstop as a man. I have to admit I cried as well. Why would you kill her like that? What sort of person are you?]
5/5 star rating
[ I hope you stay alone for the rest of your miserable existence or die horribly you *%&@, stupid @’:%,I Can’t believe a *%@=+&£.]
4/5 star rating
[ runningfromlyfe:%&@ing c@%&£.]
3/5 star rating
[ amberdatessims: We are boh from the caribbean, I have read horrors, suspense, thrillers…then after this book popped up on my fyp I clicked it and found it actually good. A year of my life. Gone! BAD REVIW!!!]
3/5 star rating
[ Carlzt: as a man, I have to say it was a good read, well written and many things were cleared up in the end. As a man I will admit I was like a zombie for three days trying to understand why you had to do the female lead so dirty. I mean, you killed her man, her friends and after she killed herself on the verge of death the step sister basically made her blackened and probably become a ghost. I mean from the forums and discussions this is yur usual way of writing but still, you had to do her so dirty? ]
4/5 star rating
[ Vicenasekidsxi: You know, i was a normal person twenty years ago, you would think that as a healthy person who exercised, ate well and maintained himself that I would continue to be healthy. Then I read your books. Now I have to take medication because i seem to have heart problems and my nerves are trippy. I tell myself over and over its just a book the characters are fake but then I get happy, mad, angry, bervous, sad, depressed….I feel like a woman on her period!]
3/5 star rating
[ riceandpeas: You will resurrect the female lead author right? Or at last kill off the stepsister, right author? I will change this to a five star if you do.]
4/5 stars
[PiousreaderofVanity: Again, once again something brilliant. Valentines day, independence day for all of us Barbadians and christmaas. Every year, same thing. Every year like an addict wanting a fix I continue to read these books and webnovels. Ah, what a sucker, luckily I am strong enough if not I would be like some of these readers who have anxiety problems, heart problems and nerves.
Oh and for those who want to sue her for emotional trauma just not she made sure to list the trigger warnings and disclaimer. ]
I blinked, looking at the large screen befor me with the various sites. From the total of four thousand plus reviews, on the various famous platforms worldwide, only forty of them were positive, hoping I write a saga, while the others called for my death or cursed me to be single forever. I continued to read the reviews moving to the popular asian review site.
I was over sixty, single sure, but that was only because the guy I had been with for twenty years had left me for my niece I had pitied and raised.
Of course, they had four kids now and even grandchildren. Every time I saw them I wanted to stab their parents with a knife in their head in front of them so they could have life long trauma.
Annoyed, I sold my apartment I had bought and bought five acres of land, built a treehouse and a bike, travelling only when I had an event which ended up being every three months.
Thinking back, when the restrictions on me were finally released I could not escape fast enough with everything.
Why would I bother staying in China?
The entire point of me going there was because of him and my aunt who was actually Chinese, a waste of my youth!
Ehm, that is a long story.
Then I began writing, the first book was of course about my life in this world, I changed the names and some events but it was of those shameless couple in the beginning before it was warped by me into… a tragedy.
It took so long to finish but that was because of the haunting from the others who simply were like torture forcing me to write.
I also contacted my lawyer and decided to have the eggs I had previously donated on a whim to be used.
He had asked if he could use them and I agreed, anyway we knew each other for almost twenty years now and though he was older, he was in peak form and looked far from his age.
As someone from Barbados just like my original self, I also wanted my own people to have that legacy even though he looked and spoke Chinese, his parents were three generation born Barbadians only returning with the children when they were two and visiting the island.
With that thought, it was why I decided to make almost all of my male characters Asian males.
What a twist no?
A black female and Asian male leads. Anyway books with an Asian male and black female was extremely rare which amounted for most of my books becoming so popular.
Anyway, it didn’t matter, just that my bloodline would be out there.
After, I became a Web novelist and learned how to make my own shampoo, creams, and soaps, creating my brand.
First it was curiosity but then it became a hobby and then a small job.
My life was productive for the past thirty years. I even practised tai chi, judo, boxing, running and went to the gym to stay in shape. Even if I was over sixty I still looked no more than thirty.
The air here was clean. I grew my own food. This was a good life.
Only that I was a bit lonely.
Sigh.
Should I make the book into a saga?
Make her live again? I have already done a few drafts, but should I publish them? My editor was talking about it, those I sent for her to peruse had been praised but… I dunno.
Then there is the first book. I had thought about having children back then with my fiance but he wanted to wait, on a whim I wrote her and also decided on a son even though I would have liked a daughter.
That book was slightly different with triplets each one from friends I secretly had a crush on and also the best friend of that female character who was secretly my type.
Typing a few thousand words I yawned feeling sleepy.
Falling asleep moments later, the computer still on, I was woken by the feeling of pain.
I was on fire, everything around me was on fire.
Shortly after, I passed out and was burned to death.
Guess karma really is a bitch, but finally I could be free.
Chain reactions occurred throughout the world. She thought she was the author but they are characters who were affected through different eras because of the invaders, the world was supposed to progress and their lives grand and beautiful but invaders appeared causing the timelines to fall and the world to collapse. If not for Vanity’s arrival and her writing, the power from her and the belief of billions the world would have been snuffed out.
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